It’s Touchy
When I walk down the aisle
People stare
People smile and tell jokes.
Like ‘can you give me a hand?’
I can’t stand it
when I touch things it just tickles.
He he he ha ha ha he ha.
I have vains in me.
And I look like a zebra
I’m so stripey.
I walk on five legs.
Like a spider but a spider has eight legs.
And people say hey spidee.
WHAT AM I?
-By Jacob
Can you please leave me a comment guessing what I am.
To Jacob,
ReplyDeleteI like how you haven't given away really easy clues but if people really think about the clues you have given should be able to work out what your poem is about.
The clues that helped me were 'walking on five legs,' 'having vains,' 'can you give me a hand.'
From Mrs Head
To Mrs Head
ReplyDeleteI thought that people would figure it out easily because I had so many give aways in the poem but they didn't.
Next time I might need to make it even easier using clues like 'I am connected to an arm.'
From Jacob