Proofreading writing practice

 T                                   A           C                                           win      today          
today is the laste day of america's cup racing we all hope that we won it tody and bring the cup back
     NZ                                                                                                                                          .              to NZealand We have been watching the races andsome of us have evn made signs saying go NZ? it
                                                       frustrating
has been exciteing to watch but also frustrat sometimes.

Character description

Freeze ray
She lives in an ice temple and she is crazy mad turning children into stone day and night. She has knomes, and an angry army and slaves. In her freezing temple she has sparkly spiderwebs that sparkle in the sun. She lays on a ice berg and white animal skin blankets. She is so so mean she is like Medusa. Freezeray has snakes through her hair and she eats pizza when it's hot so don't judge because she is an ice queen because she is Queen of Antarctica's, penguins polarbears and many more cold animals.The wind goes swoosh swoosh swoosh because it's so windy in her temple.

Evidence of achieving my maths goals

My maths goal is to learn my two, three, four, five and ten times tables and division. 

This video shows I now my ten times 

What is culture?

Mrs Head asked us what is culture? We could show her and Room 9 any way we wanted, what we thought culture is. I choose to create a sock puppet video to explain what I thought.

Chinese Cinderella

Today Mrs Head started our new chapter book after lunch. I liked the end of chapter two because the title of next chapter is Nai Nai's bound feet and I found it interesting that Nai Nai has cooiled feet now I want to know more about bound feet.

Room 9's Assembly

Room 9 had an amazing assembly it was so cool. When my Kiwiana movie went on I was so shy next time I will try not to be shy and laugh about it instead because everyone loved it so I didn't need to be shy. My favourite part was Doodledum Dancing.

What Am I poem

It’s Touchy

When I walk down the aisle

People stare

People smile and tell jokes.

Like ‘can you give me a hand?’

I can’t stand it

when I touch things it just tickles.

He he he ha ha ha he ha. 

I have vains in me.

And I look like a zebra

I’m so stripey.

I walk on five legs.

Like a spider but a spider has eight legs.

And  people say hey spidee.

WHAT AM I?

-By Jacob

Can you please leave me a comment guessing what I am.