Proofreading writing practice

 T                                   A           C                                           win      today          
today is the laste day of america's cup racing we all hope that we won it tody and bring the cup back
     NZ                                                                                                                                          .              to NZealand We have been watching the races andsome of us have evn made signs saying go NZ? it
                                                       frustrating
has been exciteing to watch but also frustrat sometimes.

Character description

Freeze ray
She lives in an ice temple and she is crazy mad turning children into stone day and night. She has knomes, and an angry army and slaves. In her freezing temple she has sparkly spiderwebs that sparkle in the sun. She lays on a ice berg and white animal skin blankets. She is so so mean she is like Medusa. Freezeray has snakes through her hair and she eats pizza when it's hot so don't judge because she is an ice queen because she is Queen of Antarctica's, penguins polarbears and many more cold animals.The wind goes swoosh swoosh swoosh because it's so windy in her temple.